Sunday, April 17, 2005

Something Wrong? A Poem

 

There`s something wrong with her

 A certain sadness, lingers in the air

 Pronounces her passing,

 as clouds conceal the warming rays. 

 

Lifelong burdens, never truly gone,

The grimace in her sometimes smile

reveals the weight of destiny.  

 

People question her activity

the glee she sees in camera`s lens

captured one by one

and every day a symphony.  

 

Yet lying down at night, alone

awaiting Somnus` divine repose

She cannot help but think of things,

denying life its happiness.  

 

The nights are endless, yet

an inkling, a spark is kindled

from the beauty

a lens allowed her.

 

In reverie, she thinks

of butterflies and flowers

of children`s smiles

of moonlit nights

and stars divine.

 

Awakened with a start,

a smile upon her lips,

she stretches like a kitten

her thoughts in happiness.

 

Perhaps the camera

brings focus to her life

What is gone is done

and Art is happiness.

 

C 2005  Deabler, V.T.

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh V!  This is absolutely your best ever ... not a shred of doubt.  It's perfect!

Anonymous said...

I have to agree V- I love this one.. Best of all. ~Sooz

Anonymous said...

You've said so much in this poem, covered depth and all of life. My favorite words in this poem are " What is gone and done and Art is happiness."
(((((Vince))))) *Barb

Anonymous said...

What is gone is done

and Art is happiness.

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Ahhh, the story of my life.  A good meditation.  Thank you.

Anonymous said...

Amen!!!! The most creative minds are the tortured ones... For many, art is their savior.

Anonymous said...

Have you posted this before?  Somehow I think I have read it earlier.  Beautiful, I love it.

Anonymous said...

Ooo, I like this.  "...She cannot help but think of things,
denying life its happiness...."  Very nice!  

Is art happiness?  I wonder.  Maybe it's just the process.  In any case ~ beautiful.   :)  

Anonymous said...

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I really LOVE this one !!!!

Stacy

Anonymous said...

{{{{{Vince}}}}}

This is another poem that I want in that coffee table book I commented about recently  :)

Vivian

Anonymous said...

Vince

This is so lovely. It reminds me of one you wrote several months back. Quiet, beautiful images...I never forgot it.

Always, Carly :)

Anonymous said...

This is beautiful!  I love it, I read it and then reread it again. :-)

Monica
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Anonymous said...

I love it, at first I felt a loneliness and then I discovered a beauty in it that I even seemed to find in my own life.  I love it!

Derek

Anonymous said...

ah, wonderful vince..

you captured it.

Anonymous said...

Beautiful!!!

Anonymous said...

very lovely...yes it is :)