Wednesday, March 2, 2005

LAUREN PART 4

  Lauren was moved by the poem, yet was unsure if it was written for her. After all, she had just spoken a few words with Brent. She shuddered as she remembered the feeling of his finger lightly caressing her shoulder.

 And what if it was for her? She was a married woman with two children and a wonderful husband. The last thing she needed was a romantic complication in her life!

 And yet, how beautiful the poem, how sensuous! Lauren imagined leaving a comment at Brent`s website, and how foolish she would feel if the poem was not written for her. She was just about to exit the website when she noticed Brent`s EMail address.

 She thought, "What harm could it do to send him an EMail complimenting his poetry. Maybe just leave my cell phone number!" She felt a warmth in her body, an excitement that she had long since forgotten! Before her better sense could argue with her, Lauren typed the EMail and hit send.  

c 2005 Vince

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

AHA - a well-sent speedy email will beat a frustrated doubting conscious every time!!!  Good thinking V!

Anonymous said...

And he'll reply and let her know the poem was written just for her. Then again, maybe he'll just hint that it was and make Lauren wonder a little more. ;)

Anonymous said...

saucy!..

Anonymous said...

We're off to the races! Woooohoooooo!  

Great job, Vince! I am HOOKED, baby, HOOKED! :-D

Anonymous said...

And then hit 'unsend'.  And then send.  And then unsend... ;)

Anonymous said...

Loving this so much. *Barb*

Anonymous said...

i THINK, but i could be mistaken... that the poem was for me and Lauren should BACK OFF :p ~Sue

Anonymous said...

unless  your married, but I'm sure you have the women in J-land going crazy.

D