Lying in bed
a noise awakens,
darkness forbids my senses.
A growl,
deep throated,
It leaps upon the bed
clawing.
Meowing,
A Pussy Cat!
C 2005 Deabler, V.T.
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- Philly `burbs, Pennsylvania, United States
- All characterological defenses, fetishes and addictions are life-limiting attempts to fulfill personal strivings for creative heroism in service to the denial of death anxiety. V T Deabler, 2008 c2005-2006 All Rights Reserved
18 comments:
How neat! I overcame my night time fears with your story on Alucard. I started reading that story when I was alone in my darkness in the terrible hours of the night. I was sucha sissy...not no more! LOL! hugs...gloria
LOL I could have written this poem. Wonderful Vince. I loveeeeeeeeeee it.
How cute!!! Gotta love it, and I DO. {{{{Vince}}}} *Barb*
LOVE IT!
~JerseyGirl
http://journals.aol.com/cneinhorn/WonderGirl
Hmmm very interesting...I like it!
Vivian
I'd be remiss if I didn't note, that you and I have this same experience before us! Masterful writing! I sense that darkness really really forbiding my senses!!
Thanks for stopping by my journal, yours is very creative, I love it!! Heather~
I've had nights like that!
Monica
http://journals.aol.com/sonensmilinmon/SmilinMonsAdventures/
Better than a 200 pound dog jumping up on your bed and pushing you off!!
Excellent - well done Vince :o)
Of course those pussy cats like to think they're big and scary don't they!!
Sara x
Vince
I love the light hearted change of pace. Obviously you never had a kitty the size Elvis is...30 pounds at his last visit to see the doctor! LOL. He's big boned.
Always, Carly
VERY LOVELY ENDING.....
Almost anti-climatic....almost.
~ckb
awwww sweet little kitty ~Carlette~
LOL!!
I LOVE this.
what a great surprise and it captures
the heart of a kitty!
great job!
I'll never forget the day i woke up with a tuxedo
Siamese lying on the pillow beside me, massaging
my chest with declawed fore=paws. And as soon
as i realised she was just a cat, she gave me a
sharp love=bite on the cheek. Talk about your
wake=up calls! Wasn't even my cat.
[and thanks 4 being in the Moment^^]
I'm glad you didn't claim ownership of the bed.....as in "my bed"......
we all know who will. : )
Candace
OOoh you had me on the edge! Silly kitty. ~Sue
I like this one. Cute!
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