Once in a while it happens,
like falling snow at night
collapses colors to their source,
sadness envelops me.
Thoughts travel their circular path...
well trodden and muddy,
descending, inevitably,
into ignominy and shame.
c 2005 Deabler, V.T.
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Just a Poem!!
V
Happens to me too. But you make it sound sad yet beautiful.
sad but beautiful.
kathy
Awesome poem!!! You just hang in there buddy, You'll be running happy again soon- Keith
Said it before but will say it again. Nobody can string words as eloquently as you do. Hugs. *Barb*
Cher {{{{{ Vincent }}}}},
You're such a master of/with words!!
Vivienne
Sad and thoughtful. Don't we all do that to ourselves time and time again? Poetry heals. Keep on writing. http://journals.aol.com/dcmeyer420/DearDiary/
I am sorry you are feeling blue. Take care, take heart, this to shall pass.
Always, Carly
Thanks, everyone.
I`m fine, really! It`s just a poem!! LOL
V
Oh these kinds of moments are so paralyzing. Hang in there. You described it so well....the perception of a true writer.
Angela
V I'm glad you are fine....very powerful poem, see you had us worried!
~JerseyGirl
http://journals.aol.com/cneinhorn/WonderGirl
oh V~ you are rapidly capturing the essences of being human.
good stuff from one poet to another....
We all have things we'll do over if we could...sigh.
I really like this one. Vivid imagery. :) L, Jenn
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