Wednesday, May 11, 2005

A POEM "HOLINESS"

Again, the little door to darkness

opens with incantation;

"Bless me Father,

       for I have sinned."

 

A woman, head bowed, uncovered

as is the modern want,

recites her litany of little sins,

envy, doubt, despair-

Unfaithfulness!

 

In his dark corner, the priest

leans toward the voice,

"Tell me of this unfaithfulness

of what, and where, and whom."

 

In two score years of ministering

he never tires of the sounds,

as women tell their tales.

 

Slowly he leads her to that first meeting,

that first kiss,

Oh, the love he can feel in her memories.

 

He smiles at love`s blossoming,

the titter in her whispering,

no longer shameful

but proud in lustful abandon.

 

And of the sighs of pain

at the inevitable loss,

her suitor gone,

taking all the fairy tales.

 

It is only in this little room,

when all the tales are told,

that he can cry for love

the savoring, never come.

 

V

C 2005   Deabler, V.T.

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

What a perspective! I like that you can inhabit a priest's mind  and feel for him. Bravo, Vince!

Anonymous said...

All I can say is "Wow"!

Anonymous said...

I have often wondered if some priests secretly took pleasure in the confessions of their parishoners. I think some do.

Anonymous said...

Vince, this is superb.

Anonymous said...

Wow.  How profound!
Powerful!
I love it Vince!
Connie

Anonymous said...

Sounds like this could be a novel: Confession Of The Sacrifice. Some types of suffering is so well hidden we never think about it existing. Excellent writing!

Anonymous said...

Sounds like this could be a novel: Confession Of The Sacrifice. Some types of suffering are so well hidden we never think about it existing. Excellent writing!

Anonymous said...

I am in awe your power of the pen V.  Each poem more cutting into the human soul, each dab blessings found more profound.  My heart breaks.

Anonymous said...

This one brought tears to my eyes. Nobody can string the words as eloquently as you can: not string them in such a way as to touch the heart of a woman's soul.
(((((VINCE))))))  *Barb*

Anonymous said...

Very empathetic.  And, may I say, brave.

Anonymous said...

This one, this one is my favorite so far.

xxoo

Anonymous said...

awww...thats beautiful..thank u for the link, I been missin out, lol

Anonymous said...

How sad this makes me feel.  Both for her lost love and his lack thereof..

Anonymous said...

*Complexity & Complication!*
Confession is the largest sacrament because
it opens every soul. [Plus+, ya can't get to
Paradise without it.] lata V

Anonymous said...

Vince, I thought I had commented on this but I see I didn't.  This is very rich and thoughtful.  How sad, how sad - and how tenderly conveyed.

Vicky
http://www.livejournal.com/users/vxv789/

Anonymous said...

poignant....profound....I love it!!!!

Anonymous said...

Oh V! I love this one....wow, one of your best to date!
~  www.jerseygirljournal.com

Anonymous said...

hello V, i just wanted you to know i've been here, visiting, roaming through your poems and thoughts.  i particularly enjoyed your answers to theresa's questions, especially the question about your Rollo May quote.  i was listening to two doctors this morning, on the Diane Reem show, discussing their books - they call the place where a baby or toddler is about to launch into a spurt of emotional or intellectual growth "touch points."  at these points, the child may regress and seem particularly infantile - causing parental worry.  they said that regression is actually a strong place, where the child is gathering force to launch into the new and unknown.  this is what you seem to be describing when you talk about anxiety - i think we have our "touch points" as adults also.