Again, the little door to darkness
opens with incantation;
"Bless me Father,
for I have sinned."
A woman, head bowed, uncovered
as is the modern want,
recites her litany of little sins,
envy, doubt, despair-
Unfaithfulness!
In his dark corner, the priest
leans toward the voice,
"Tell me of this unfaithfulness
of what, and where, and whom."
In two score years of ministering
he never tires of the sounds,
as women tell their tales.
Slowly he leads her to that first meeting,
that first kiss,
Oh, the love he can feel in her memories.
He smiles at love`s blossoming,
the titter in her whispering,
no longer shameful
but proud in lustful abandon.
And of the sighs of pain
at the inevitable loss,
her suitor gone,
taking all the fairy tales.
It is only in this little room,
when all the tales are told,
that he can cry for love
the savoring, never come.
V
C 2005 Deabler, V.T.
18 comments:
What a perspective! I like that you can inhabit a priest's mind and feel for him. Bravo, Vince!
All I can say is "Wow"!
I have often wondered if some priests secretly took pleasure in the confessions of their parishoners. I think some do.
Vince, this is superb.
Wow. How profound!
Powerful!
I love it Vince!
Connie
Sounds like this could be a novel: Confession Of The Sacrifice. Some types of suffering is so well hidden we never think about it existing. Excellent writing!
Sounds like this could be a novel: Confession Of The Sacrifice. Some types of suffering are so well hidden we never think about it existing. Excellent writing!
I am in awe your power of the pen V. Each poem more cutting into the human soul, each dab blessings found more profound. My heart breaks.
This one brought tears to my eyes. Nobody can string the words as eloquently as you can: not string them in such a way as to touch the heart of a woman's soul.
(((((VINCE)))))) *Barb*
Very empathetic. And, may I say, brave.
This one, this one is my favorite so far.
xxoo
awww...thats beautiful..thank u for the link, I been missin out, lol
How sad this makes me feel. Both for her lost love and his lack thereof..
*Complexity & Complication!*
Confession is the largest sacrament because
it opens every soul. [Plus+, ya can't get to
Paradise without it.] lata V
Vince, I thought I had commented on this but I see I didn't. This is very rich and thoughtful. How sad, how sad - and how tenderly conveyed.
Vicky
http://www.livejournal.com/users/vxv789/
poignant....profound....I love it!!!!
Oh V! I love this one....wow, one of your best to date!
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hello V, i just wanted you to know i've been here, visiting, roaming through your poems and thoughts. i particularly enjoyed your answers to theresa's questions, especially the question about your Rollo May quote. i was listening to two doctors this morning, on the Diane Reem show, discussing their books - they call the place where a baby or toddler is about to launch into a spurt of emotional or intellectual growth "touch points." at these points, the child may regress and seem particularly infantile - causing parental worry. they said that regression is actually a strong place, where the child is gathering force to launch into the new and unknown. this is what you seem to be describing when you talk about anxiety - i think we have our "touch points" as adults also.
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